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There was a bit of delay, but I finally scraped the time together to write a proper critique (or try to, at the very least).
For the most part, the animation looks pretty smooth to me. However, when panning towards characters during the old man scene, I noticed the background was slightly cut off prematurely and then there was just a black border (I don't mean where that appeared to be done intentionally for dramatic effect). In the scene where the old man whacked the trio with his... walking device... thingy, I liked the visualization of the sound effect like in comic books. However, I noticed it lingered on a bit after he hit Snowball, and it wasn't consistent for when he hit Onions and Kolawskum. I noticed in the scene where they're contemplating what to do with the old man's body, Snowball kind of cuts Onions off mid-word. Was that intentional, or was that a glitch with the audio?
As far as the content itself goes, there were definitely some genuinely amusing moments. I feel like the gag about how the old man was so old was a tad overly long, and so the jokes started to get old (no pun intended). The part where Onions explains where he got the potion from is still my favorite (probably because my brain is more geared to enjoy more "adult" humor), but the part where the old man turns out to be not quite dead right before Snowball vaporizes his body is a close second.